hey yoh..frend...miss yah...i see this post as a poemand i say, i have been overwhelmed by how much a number and the title can so intelligently comprise a poem...this is tersely brilliant.short, flash, strong...wow!i so like iti was like...wow!really..no kiddingthis is a poem of stir..new..fresh..truly, i see images of two people standing..trying to hide from what ever that makes them hide ..like bonnie and clyde...and employing number 11 is super new and amazing...but the title helped a lot in my analysis...this is lovely...from the bottom of my critique heart...and mind ...of course..hehehehlov yah frend! :) take care//seee yah soon ayt?
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hey yoh..frend...miss yah...
i see this post as a poem
and i say, i have been overwhelmed by how much a number and the title can so intelligently comprise a poem...
this is tersely brilliant.
short, flash, strong...
wow!
i so like it
i was like...wow!
really..no kidding
this is a poem of stir..new..fresh..
truly, i see images of two people standing..trying to hide from what ever that makes them hide ..like bonnie and clyde...
and employing number 11 is super new and amazing...but the title helped a lot in my analysis...
this is lovely...from the bottom of my critique heart...and mind ...of course..heheheh
lov yah frend! :) take care//seee yah soon ayt?
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